DaveSlayer's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[I Sit Alone]

The idea is generally nice and the rhythmical pattern is good, however, the whole second part feels rather homogenous, I would spice it up with some different riffs. The solo feels a bit out of place. And I suppose there was a struggle in the mastering process. From what I hear the track is drowning in bass, I'd suggest lowering the bass a bit and upping 1-5 kHz instead. Also the drums kind of clip, probably because of the same bass overload. Giving some to 5+ kHz also tends to help make it sound less "closed". Best of luck to you!

Soundslave responds:

sounds better as a wav file actually

[The Unexpected (NGADM AUDITION)]

The riffs are right solid, and I think you could make a decent grunge piece out of this. 'Cause, y'know, right now it sounds like you just put several different pieces together. In any case, I like it!

Soundslave responds:

yeah cheers I got a few interesting pieces comming,,im getting good at this guitar thing! stay tuned

[Beast Unleashed]

Good, but have some things to work on

Yeah, that's very good and headbanging song. But:
1. I didn't hear the solo, really... Try to make the solo-guitar a little louder.
2. Sometimes vocals are f**king up a bit. I think that was just random mistakes.
3. Vocals should be a little louder too...
4. Too much excess sounds like pick strokes.
I vote this 9/10, 5/5.

CyriltheWolf responds:

Yeap! :)

[No Remorse - Riff]

That's all cool, but...

But it's all too easy for playing. No Remorse main riff isn't interesting, try to play intro solo.

Zyclon responds:

sorry, I don't do requests. Lets hear you play it. I don't see any music on your profile so I'm guessing you can't do much besides talk. Prove me wrong.

[Doomsday!]

Hey, cool

Rocky thing. If it's yours, hail to the metal compositor's god.

[Manhunter]

Not so bad...

Good thing... But soooo repeating...

TheRealSam responds:

Yeah it's because it was supposed to have some vocals :s
But anyway, thanks for the review! :)